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Post by silverpaw on Sept 7, 2005 15:32:03 GMT -5
Name: Silverpaw Clan: RiverClan Position: Apprentice Age: 7 (In moons) Gender: She-cat Peltage: Silverpaw is a grey cat with black spots/patterns on her body. (Complete Sentences) Picture: *Optional* Personality: Silverpaw can be rambunctious, but she knows when seriousness is needed. She looks forward to being a great warrior one day. (Complete Sentences) IC: Silverpaw observed her mentor's every move as she was shown how to catch a mouse. When the time came, she executed the motions in a precise manner, the mouse dead in a few seconds. When her mentor praised her, she dipped her head in thanks. "What would you like me to do next?" she inquired, hoping they could go back to camp. Code: Starclan's Wrath
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Sept 7, 2005 15:58:44 GMT -5
Yay! Thanks for being in Riverclan
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Sept 7, 2005 15:59:37 GMT -5
There's only one thing you have to fix. That is the IC. It needs to be a couple more sentences.
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Post by goldheart on Sept 7, 2005 16:16:08 GMT -5
yay! another bengal! prettypaw and leopardpaw won't be the only ones!
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Post by silverpaw on Sept 7, 2005 16:37:42 GMT -5
Fixed! lol...it needed the pronouns to be changed, too. I accidentally put "she" and "her." Talk about a gender-confused cat. All my other characters have been she-cats, so it was habit, I suppose.
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Sept 7, 2005 16:40:21 GMT -5
ohh. lol! me too. but now I have 1 tom. You're accepted!
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Post by goldheart on Sept 7, 2005 16:42:17 GMT -5
well i have 1 tom too, but all the rest are she-cats so i get sonfused too. sneak peek: i'll have 2 toms soon
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Post by silverpaw on Sept 7, 2005 16:44:52 GMT -5
Thanks! Glad I'm not the only one, lol
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