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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 19, 2006 10:31:51 GMT -5
Squirrelflight was walking along the bank of the lake. She herd something move in the bushes. ' What is that moving?' thought Squirrelflight. Then out of the blue, RowanClaw jumped out of the bush.
" Why are you here? You are on ShadowClan territory! If BlackStar found you he would rip you to crow food. Here let me get you through the territoy so you will not get caught." said RowanClaw.
" Why are you doing this RowanClaw? You just want me to be ripped to crow food." said Squirrelflight.
" No. I will tell you at the next gathering." said RowanClan. " In frount of BrambleClaw."
to be countinued
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Aug 20, 2006 8:28:37 GMT -5
I'm intrigued =D Do write more
A word of advice: try adding a little more description.
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 20, 2006 16:48:31 GMT -5
At the next gathering RowenClaw found Squirrelflight alone.
" Hi, Squirrelflight. Would you like to sit next to Brambleclaw and I? I would like to tell you something important." asked RowenClaw.
" Sure, RowenClaw. I would love to. Thanks for inviting me." replyed Squirrelflight with a thrill of joy.
They were finally there. " Brambleclaw, do you mind if Squirrelflight sits with us?" asked RownClaw.
" No, I don't mind." replyed Brambleclaw.
" Squirrelflight, I need to tell you something important. Will you not tell anyone else. Just your sister?" said RowenClaw.
" I would only tell my sister. No one else." said Squirrelflight. She had the feeling that what he was going to tell her was forbiden, but important.
" Squirrelflight, I love you. I know it is forbiden but you are the one I had loved aver since I met you." said RowenClaw.
" RowenClaw, I love you to. I mean how will we see each other. We are in different clans, you know what would happen if out leaders found out? I will love you forever. We will have to work things out." said Squirrelflight.
" Don't worry. I have a plan. But I will tell you later. You will find out soon." awnsered RowenClaw.
to be countinued.
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 20, 2006 16:55:28 GMT -5
If you want me to write more read the whole story so far, and give me some ideas on what RowenClaw will do to be with Squirrelflight.
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 20, 2006 17:01:26 GMT -5
Well, i am going to write more anyway.
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 20, 2006 17:32:36 GMT -5
' What was RowenClaw planning to do to be with Squirrelflight? I know RowenClaw loves her, but if he is going to leave his own clan to be part of ThunderClan, he will be hated forever! By his own clan.' thought Brambleclaw ' I wounder if Squirrelflight really loves him. I am going to fight to the end to get her back. I am not having a ShadowClan warrior take Squirrelflight away from me!'
Squirrelflight was walking to the boader of ShadowClan terriory. She was waiting for RowenClaw. He was going to StarClan to ask if he could swith clans. ' Hopefully StarClan will tell Desertstar through a dream that RowenClaw was going to become a ThunderClan warrior. I hope that he will not get caught, I love him and nothing is going to stop him from being with me.' thought Squirrelflight.
Suddenley RowenClaw paded silently out of the bushes. " Here I am Squirrelflight. Let's go. I would hope that StarClan will let me leave ShadowClan. My clan is dieing from hunger." said RowenClaw.
" Don't worry. I have to talk to StarClan about an important thing. I can't live with BrambleClaw. I think he is jelous that I am with you. He will fight for me. We have to be cafuley." said Squirrelflight.
" Here we are. Highstones. " said RowenClaw.
The two cats walked into the cave and touched their noses to the rock.
" RowenClaw, we know why to are here. You want to switch clans. You may, but you will find it hard to be in ThunderClan. Desertstar will be noticed." said BlueStar
" Squirrelflight, you must watch BrambleClaw, he is going to fight to get you back so make sure you be careful of him." said Redtail.
" yes. i will." replyed Squirrelflight.
The two cats walked back to their clans in a mood of happyness and in question.
When Squirrelflight returned her leader was waiting for her. " Do you know who is the new cat? I have a good sense that you know." said Desertstar.
to be countined.
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 21, 2006 8:14:38 GMT -5
" Yes, I do. It is RowenClaw. He is nice, you have to let him come in." said Squirrelflight.
" I know why, you love him, don't you? Don't lye to me! Or you will have to become a queen, with no return to the warriors den. Got it?!" Desertstar almost yelling.
" Yes, I do. I am not lyeing. I can no longer trust Brambleclaw. He is trusting his own brother, not me. Hawkfrost is going to distroy all of the Clans! I can't trust anyone who trusts him." said Squirrelflight.
" Get, Brambleclaw I need to talk to him about his brother. Now!" said a very mad Desertstar. " Squirrelflight, I am sorry that I yelled at you, when you find RowenClaw bring him to me also."
" It is ok. I will do." said Squirrelflight. As she headed into the warriors den, Brambleclaw paded up to her.
" What do you think you are going to do with RowenClaw, you are going agenst warrior code!" Said and upset Brambleclaw.
" No, I am not. RowenClaw is joinning out clan. Go see Desertstar." said Squirrelflight.
Squirrelflight watched as Brambleclaw left the den. She soon followed and left to look for RowenClaw.
" Squirrelflight, are you there?" called out RowenClaw. " Desertstar said to wait out here till she came and got me to tell the clan the news."
" No... She already told them. Everyone is sort of happy, because that means we have another warrior to help out the clan. You see, we don't have enough kits and apprentices at the moment so queens and she-cat warriors need to mate more often then any other time." said Squirrelflight. " I need to take you to Desertstar, so you can become a part of this clan."
to be countined.
Would you like to here more? Then you must wait.
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 22, 2006 16:57:04 GMT -5
" Ok. I trust that your clan will let me in. I mean, I am from ShadowClan the most hated clan in all of the Clans!?" said RowenClaw.
" I am sure. Desertstar told them that we would have a new member from ShadowClan and Brambleclaw, being him, he told everyone and they all agreed that you where nice and is a
good fighter. Man was Brambleclaw mad. He wanted everyone to be mad that you where coming." said Squirrelflight with pride.
The two cats walked into the heart of the ThunderClan clearing. Whispers started around them. And Desertstar, walked out of her den and called to the clan for a clan meeting.
" As you know, we have a new member of ower clan. RowenClaw. Yes, he is from ShadowClan, but I trust he is not going back. He hates ShadowClan, and the clan is going insane with the amout of kits they have. This meeting is over. Squirrelflight, RowenClaw. Come with me. Squirrelflight, I know you would like to stay a warrior for a while, but we need more kits...." said Desertstar.
TO BE CONTINUED.... YOU MUST WAIT TILL I GET SOME FEED BACK ABOUT MY STORY SO FAR!
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 25, 2006 8:03:17 GMT -5
" What do you mean, Desertstar? Mate? I would want to wait for a little while." said Squirrelflight.
" Yes, that is what I am trying to say. But, think about it." said Desertstar.
TO BE CONTIUED
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 28, 2006 12:15:48 GMT -5
" I think I am going to talk to Sorreltail. She should know what to do. You can to to the medicne cat for those cuts." said Squirrelflight. " Then meet me outside camp. Then we
can talk about it."
" All right Squirrelflight." said RowenClaw and he headed towerdes the medicine cats den.
Squirrelflight entered the nursrey where Sorreltail sat. " Sorreltail, I need to talk to you. Is
it a good life being a queen?" asked Squirrelflight.
" It is all right. I mean you are frequntley told to stay here, but you get more time to your self. Why did Desertstar ask you to become a queen? If so take the spot. We need more queens." said Sorreltail.
" Ok. I have to talk to RowenClaw about it though. Because Brambleclaw is no happy about it. He loves me and I know it. But I can not be sure if he is trying to get me back with being untrustwourthy." Said Squirrelflight. " I will talk to RowenClaw know and tell him my desison."
" OK. See you later."said Sorreltail.
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Post by squirrlflight on Aug 29, 2006 12:15:48 GMT -5
Squirrelflight walked out of camp and found RowenClaw waiting. " Have you made you desionson?" asked RowenClaw.
" Yes. I think I will bacome a queen for a while. No one will need to know. Just DesertStar. I am going to talk to her now. Care to come with me?" ask Squirrelflight.
"Sure." said RowenClaw.
The pair walked into the camp. As they headed towards the leaders den they herd shouting.
" Brambleclaw, I don't think that Squirrelflight likes you anymore. You are treating her horrible." said Desertstar.
" I treat her that way because I love her too much." said Brambleclaw crying.
" Why don't you go to the back of the den." said Desertstar.
Then Squirrelflight entered with RowenClaw following. " Desertstar, we have decided to mate for the clan and nothing else." said Squirrelflight.
" Yes. Now I need you go to the medicne cat Squirrelflight to get ready. Then RowenClaw, then you go. Then at moon high go out of the clan with Sorreltail and Brackenfur and they will show you what to do." said Desertstar.
TO BE CONTINUED.... WILL THE TWO MATE? TOUGH YOU MUST WAIT.
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Post by squirrlflight on Sept 5, 2006 12:17:04 GMT -5
ooc: Ok, it will not be graphic. but I need more people to read mine
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Post by snowfire on Dec 23, 2006 8:06:55 GMT -5
It's pretty good! Waiting for more......
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Dec 23, 2006 13:37:53 GMT -5
Keep going! I'm still enticed!
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Post by squirrlflight on Apr 1, 2007 10:22:40 GMT -5
A few mins later the four returned and it was already sunrise, with them they had fresh kill for the clan, why would they not return without fresh kill?? Squirrelflight joined the queens while bringing them fresh kill and she sat down to talk to them. "Well, I guess I will be with you for a while." she said, beaming about being with the queens. When she told them her story, they were so enchanted and happy.
more coming soon, starting to get museless....
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