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Torn
Apr 14, 2006 14:22:23 GMT -5
Post by reedfoot on Apr 14, 2006 14:22:23 GMT -5
This chapter isn't finished. I'm just trying to think of what else to put, so I just thought that I should post what I have.
Chapter Six
After a few moonrises, Cherrypaw’s wound was mostly healed. She and Smokepaw, along with Gingerpaw, could train together again. Cherrypaw was on a hunting patrol. She dropped into a hunter’s crouch as she smelt a water vole. She crept forward. She saw the vole and was about to pounce, when, out of nowhere, a black cat pounced on the vole and ate it. Cherrypaw stifled a gasp as she realized who the cat was. It was Nightclaw, the cat who had wounded her! This was her chance! She could get back at him! And she had a reason, too! “Don’t move.” a voice said from behind her. She froze as she scented Shadowclan. Of course Nightclaw wouldn’t be alone!
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Apr 21, 2006 19:14:44 GMT -5
Post by reedfoot on Apr 21, 2006 19:14:44 GMT -5
Due to my limited time on my computer and lack of interest, I have decided to cancel this story. This may change, but for the time being I shall not write any more of 'Torn'.
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Apr 21, 2006 19:44:07 GMT -5
Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Apr 21, 2006 19:44:07 GMT -5
Awwwww :/ too bad! I hope your time clears up! ~:Goldy:~
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Apr 21, 2006 19:49:17 GMT -5
Post by reedfoot on Apr 21, 2006 19:49:17 GMT -5
I'm doing my best to get my parents to change my time limit on the computer...I've been doing pretty good in school, so they're bound to change it soon...I may start writing more of my story soon....not sure, yet.
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