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Post by jaystripe on Feb 21, 2009 17:58:58 GMT -5
Jaystripe walks out of the warriors den he mind cloudy with sleep and the dream he had last night it still confused him but it seemed he was drownding in the lake but the water was all green he didnt no what this ment but he was glad it was over it was a cold and rainy morning he want to the frsh kill pile only to pick up a kinda muddy vole but when he ate it it didnt taste to bad he looked around hte clearing and it was the normal the kits out playing the elders complaing and his fellow warriors doing there normal tasks
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Feb 27, 2009 20:53:39 GMT -5
ooc; is Jaystripe in New or Old ShadowClan? If he's in old, he should be in the ThunderClan territory. I'm just making sure.
Risingmoon slipped back into camp, her mood sinking as the sun rose. It was as if the presence of the sun weighed her down and pulled her mood towards the damp earth. When that ball of flooding light was low, beneath the horizon, the Medicine Cat's moods soured. They flew into the sky, joining the stars that the ungraceful sun so cruelly hid. StarClan was only visible at night. So the healer roamed from just before twilight to a little after dawn. And now was time for her to retreat to her den, let her strong body rest, and only be wakened if there was an exaggerated emergency. But hopefully today there wouldn't be, and Risingmoon would be able to sleep.
Her mood was still relatively high, though, so on her way between the camp entrance and her dark den she stopped to greet Jaystripe. He had just woken up, it seemed, and was having his first meal of the day. Risingmoon had already enjoyed her last food for the night. "Good morning," she commented, more as a fact than a greeting.
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Post by jaystripe on Feb 28, 2009 19:03:14 GMT -5
ooc: he is in new shadowclan
IC : at first jaystripe wasnt sure if she was talkin to him it was even often he saw her unless there was an emergency she seemed to b in a good enough mood. aystripe wonder if he should ask her about his dream but it seemed silly to bother her with such nonsense. For the first time he realized how pretty the she cat was even if her belt was stickin to her due to the rain which he actual enjoyed it calmed him down. so at the moment his was in a normal mode he saw som eof his clans mates going to hide from the rain but he just stood up and sai " good morning or should i say good night " to risingmoon. Which her ealized was the perfect name for her.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 1, 2009 17:15:42 GMT -5
ooc; You're a natural at this - but one thing you could be careful of is slipping into chatspeak. If you control-click/right-click on the reply box, and make sure the spell-check is on, it'll help. Watch out for lower-case "i"s and "b" instead of "be". It can be a bit difficult, but once you get the hang of it it's easy! You did a great job with one of the more advanced things, though - setting the scenery in an interesting way.
Risingmoon smiled a bit at this idiot warrior. She knew that all warriors were stupid things, so she didn't bother getting mad at Jaystripe about it. But of course it wasn't nighttime. Just because Risingmoon was headed to her den to sleep didn't mean that day and night were switched. No, that went against the very nature of the sun and against Risingmoon's nature as well. If that brilliantly infuriating orb was so accommodating, life would be wonderful and wonderfully dark. As the cold rain streaked down from the slowly brightening sky, Risingmoon clenched her teeth. Not yelling at the idiot would be easier said than done. But I never said I wouldn't correct him, she pointed out to herself. "You should say," her clipped words explained, "That it's morning. Because it is." A muscle, tightened by frustration and the chilly air, relaxed in her abdomen. How satisfying it was snap out a bit. But she really ought not to, seeing as she was supposed to be the trusted healer. "But the rain is quite beautiful, no matter the time." Her tight smile and clenched jaw were enough to show that she was not naturally as friendly as she was trying to appear.
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Post by .Whitey. on Mar 2, 2009 17:21:52 GMT -5
A mottled brown she-cat stepped out of the bracken as the rain pittered onto the ground, she liked rain, rain was good to clean the mind. Though she often wondered what this forest would be like without it. It was then her blue eyes spotted Risingmoon and Jaystripe. Aurora's eyes narrowed sullenly as she knew that if she ignored them she'd be questioned later. Jaystripe, Risingmoon, enjoying the small downpour? it was short and down to the point with no formalities added. Her sleek brown pelt glimmered slightly in the rain as it became matted to her skin and she sat down gracefully just a little way from the two felines. The femme's intelligent eyes rolled over Jaystripe first, the newest addition to the "Clan" . If she would dare call it a "Clan." They were more like a clump of hostile cats fending from every other thing in this forsaken forest.
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Post by jaystripe on Mar 2, 2009 18:20:52 GMT -5
Jaystripe almost ignoring the downpour comment because he was more concerned about the way rissingmoon was acting it was as if she didn't appreciate him. But why should she they never talked he hardly saw her. In his mind he thought she thought she was to good for him. So in reply he said why yes we are but i think rissingmoon might be going she gets very cranky when she doesn't sleep. Kinda wishing he had taken back the words but it was to late. But all he could think was pshh she suppost to are healer how she asleep when every1 else is awake.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 4, 2009 22:26:51 GMT -5
ooc; I have to ask you to fix up that post before I reply. "Rissingmoon had a fire look in her eyes that almost scared him not even the rain could but out that fire." That's powerplaying - because only I am allowed to control Risingmoon. I never said she looked angry, so it's against the rules for you to write that. Also, can you use punctuation please? It makes posts easier to understand. Sorry for the inconvenience. Thanks.
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Post by jaystripe on Mar 5, 2009 15:22:21 GMT -5
ooc o srry
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 6, 2009 23:01:33 GMT -5
ooc; Thanks for correcting the powerplaying. Just so you know, here's your post with proper grammar and spelling:
Jaystripe was almost ignoring the downpour comment because he was more concerned about the way Risingmoon was acting. It was as if she didn't appreciate him. But why should she - they never talked and he hardly saw her. In his mind he thought that she thought she was too good for him. So, in reply, he said, "Why, yes, we are. But I think Risingmoon might be going. She gets very cranky when she doesn't sleep." He was kind of wishing he had taken back the words, but it was too late. All he could think was, "Pshh, she supposed to are healer. How can she sleep when everyone else is awake?"
IC: Risingmoon could barely believe her ears. A warrior, this openly insolent? She was the medicine cat - an esteemed position. In any Clan but this, she thought. As the words raced in her mind, an equally furious snarl ripped through her jaws. She narrowed her eyes to thin little slits of blue and sunk her long, hooked talons into the earth beneath her paws. It was too soft to be at all rewarding, and she wanted to tear through something more resistant. But she couldn't make a wound she would later have to heal. Besides, if she handled this maturely the leader would be on her side. Who am I kidding? This Clan is a natural seething mass of hatred. Everyone here loves violence. There was nothing to stop her - except the knowledge that her training as a warrior was much less in depth than Jaystripe's. The best way to win this would be cold, indignant rage.
"Did you just talk about a respected position that way? I am your medicine cat. I could have you torn to shreds in an instant. Don't you dare even think that kind of insult. You're acting like a weak, hurt kit - lashing out at your betters for no good reason and with false accusations. Foolish warrior." She spat the last word, as if it had flown into her mouth uninvited and it repulsed her so badly that all she wanted was to get it out from between her teeth. Warrior - synonymous to irrational, thoughtless, mindless, and immature.
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Post by jaystripe on Mar 7, 2009 12:05:32 GMT -5
ooc: im sorry my grammer so bad but i rush threw my typing
IC: Jaystripe very pleased he seemed to have ruffled her fur. Staring her right in the eyes wondering if she was going to pounce on him. Almost wanting her to because that would be a moral victory for him. He had always hated how she treated warriors like they knew nothing and were just piles of fur with claws. So in reply he said, " just because your a medcine cat doesnt mean your all that better then us we also have feelings and not all of us want to fight constinatly." Happy how he kept his voice cool and calm really wanting to know the reply maybe should would get his point. That not all warriors want violence he would rather not fight. But she would probaly never get this and always have her thoughts of warriors always fighting. But he wishes that things could change but knowing they never would.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 7, 2009 19:01:39 GMT -5
"Did your mother ever tell you the laws of StarClan? How to respect your Leader? Your deputy? Your medicine cat? Apparently not. And if you don't just want to fight, why start an argument with a Clanmate? It's an impressively immature and battle-hungry thing to do." Risingmoon was used to implicit disrespect - yes, she saw that all the time. But the explicit, raw insults that this Warrior was throwing at her were like nothing she'd heard recently. She had heard cruel comments like them before... but that was a memory she didn't need to dwell on. So instead she stayed in the present, fuming about these ignorant warriors and their idiotic and hypocritical ways.
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Post by jaystripe on Mar 7, 2009 20:07:08 GMT -5
Growing tired of her attidtude he really didnt want to fight with her. " i give respect to those who also give respect and thats not you. You but all the warriors into one group an act like were all the same. Also i didnt start the fight and i rather you not talk about my mother." Spitting out the last words really satisfied now that he was under her skin. But also wishing he had never started this fight in the first place but it was way to late now. Staring her straight in the eyes just waiting for her response almost wishing she would just get his point. Just because im a warrior doesnt mean im stupid.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Mar 8, 2009 15:32:04 GMT -5
Risingmoon's hiss was somehow calm, despite its cold anger. It was quiet - not as much a threat as a tiny warning. If you continue, you will have more than just me to answer to. Her words were just as patient and also just as furious. "If you don't want me to group all warriors together, give me an example of a warrior who doesn't fit the bill. You yourself are only proving to me that you are all immature, uncontrolled, and overly angry. Show some self-restraint. And if you don't know how to respect a higher power in the Clan, I suggest you leave immediately. You act more suited to be a rogue than a ShadowClanner." She laughed just a little at the end of her statement. She loved giving reckless warriors a piece of her dignified and thoughtful mind.
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Post by jaystripe on Mar 8, 2009 17:36:20 GMT -5
Jaystripe hissing with pure frustartion. He realzing that this cat will never get it she was completely narrow minded she will never get it. Standing up he flicked his tail in frustartion and said " i see you will never get it". They were few words but they would get his point across.
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Post by .Whitey. on Mar 9, 2009 13:37:43 GMT -5
The calico tabby sat and watched their little banter amusedly, a somewhat wisdomic (ooc:plural of wisdom, anyone?) expression on the middle aged she-cats face. Though she was a warrior she was probably a few moons older than Risingmoon and it suddenly dawned on her the resentment the medicine cat held for Warriors. Jaystripe, by biting back at what Risingmoon is saying to you, you are in my eyes, being our respected Medicine Cats definition of 'Warrior'; perhaps if you learned to not lash out as you do, she would try to understand you more than she is now... her voice came across archaic almost, and something within it told them she knew what she was talking about when she explained it. Her long tail wrapped around her white dipped paws as she watched almost interestedly at the pair.
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