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Post by icefang on Feb 27, 2006 20:13:55 GMT -5
IT'S TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>.<
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! *sends Firestorm, Nightstorm, Nighkit, Silverkit, Stormkit, Spiritpaw, and Frostflower after Froggy with torches and pitchforks but they run away without trying to mob Froggy*
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Post by The Only Froggems YOU KNOW! on Feb 28, 2006 18:50:58 GMT -5
lol, i will dedicate this to all my loyal followers, Dessie, Seapaw, Swifty, Sheerie, Oceanfur, Cookie, if i forgot you i am sorry! haha stormy also i guess!
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Mar 2, 2006 21:15:47 GMT -5
*bows to Froggy* I feel flattered
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Post by The Only Froggems YOU KNOW! on Mar 3, 2006 9:54:10 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by swiftwind on Mar 3, 2006 11:31:31 GMT -5
*blushes* same as Dessie!
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Post by {//.Ð € SS Î €.\\} on Mar 3, 2006 19:11:12 GMT -5
lol
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Mar 29, 2006 1:34:49 GMT -5
OMG! Froggy this is awesome!
Your writing skills....
They're magnifiscent!
Please write more as soon as possible! ~:Goldy:~
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Mar 29, 2006 20:39:55 GMT -5
she'd better write more, or i'll attack her!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Mar 30, 2006 0:51:36 GMT -5
Stormy you are SO wrong! Kinktail and Silverfoot should be together! The moment she was mentioned I was all like "Please, please, please" Swirlingwing should die...
What?
I didn't say anything! >.> ~:Goldy:~
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Post by The Only Froggems YOU KNOW! on Mar 30, 2006 17:02:48 GMT -5
oh, you guys really do love me! j/k i totally understand if you think i am crazy ;D
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Mar 30, 2006 20:19:45 GMT -5
Whooo! She understands! Yay! ~:Goldy:~
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Post by The Only Froggems YOU KNOW! on Apr 8, 2006 19:34:38 GMT -5
~Chapter 10~ Arriving at the river he stopped just short of walking out of the forest and silently watched Leopardpaw swipe in fish after fish. He stayed there for a while, it was peaceful; the only sound was his pale gray fur ruffling slightly in the cool breeze. Finally after much time had passed, and Leopardpaw had quite a stack of fish, Sliverfoot crept slowly out of the bracken directly behind Leopardpaw and whispered quietly, “Are you trying to catch all of the fish in the river?” Leopardpaw jumped with a start, hackles raised and flew at Sliverfoot. When she realized it was him she sheathed her claws but continued to jump at him. She was about to land on his shoulders, but he jumped upward, knocking Leopardpaw off course and onto the marshy ground. She instantly retaliated with a quick blow to the left side of his head. Sliverfoot fell back, slightly dazed. She sat down in front of him, a smug grin on her face. Sliverfoot blinked a couple of times, trying to clear his vision. When he could see well enough he hurriedly scrambled to his feet, he was not to be beaten by an apprentice, and his at that. He took a few steps forward, swinging his paws, trying to connect with her head. When he finally did hit her he didn’t think that he had hit her that hard, but she crumpled to the ground, making no noises. When she didn’t move Sliverfoot crept over to her, thinking that he might’ve almost killed his apprentice, for the second time. He poked and prodded but she didn’t stir. Now starting to worry he looked around for herbs. Not that he would have seriously used them, if she wasn’t dead already he would’ve surely killed her with those. He licked her golden tabby fur a few times before heaving her onto his shoulders and padding heavily back to camp. Ok you mentals here's somemore! lol j/k
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Post by rex. on Apr 8, 2006 20:01:26 GMT -5
NO!more! but thank you
critique: try using more paragraphs, rather than crumpling it all into one huge one with assorted thoughts
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Post by swiftwind on Apr 8, 2006 20:41:20 GMT -5
Leapordpaw CAN NOT die. Then everyone will hate Silverfoot!!!!!!!
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Post by |g.O.l.d.Y| on Apr 9, 2006 0:31:48 GMT -5
She's faking it ;D ~:Goldy:~
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