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Post by `s қ y . x x on Dec 26, 2007 5:28:18 GMT -5
Now, I Was Looking For Oakstorm's Bio before and for some really weird reason, I couldn't find it so, just to set the record straight, I'l going to write him up a new bio, keeping the key features of the tom, writen originally by Autumnkit within the Bio, but he has changed quite a bit in roleplay so, here it is. The new and improved bio for Oakstorm.
Name: Oakstorm.
Clan: ShadowClan.
Position: Deputy.
Age: Fourty Three Moons.
Gender: Tom.
Peltage: Strength, Slick, Swift
These are the three best words to describe Oakstorm’s physical description. He is rather large, each limb of his body rippling with strength as does his whole body. Oakstorm is generally a very slick-pelted tom, being long and rather thin, giving him great flexibility when it comes to agility. He is well built up mostly around the upper half of his body, his lower back being the weakest spot on him apart from his sensitive belly.
Oakstorm's fur is a beautiful dark gingery brown cinnamon colour, with lighter shades across the lower part of his face and chest as well as on his tail. His fur is generally rather short, apart from down his tail, which his fur starts short and as it goes down his tail, his fur gets longer, ending in a rather long-haired puff of fur at the tip.
Oakstorm's eyes are a beautiful dark blue, just lighter than sapphire but too dark to be crystal. His gaze can turn into an icy glare with ease as can his claws which are a shiny white, long with a deadly hook on the end as are his fangs in the sharp way. He does have faint tabby markings across his head though which gives him all in all a very different and handsome look.
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Personality: Clan Life;; Oakstorm is a star example of loyalty to the clan, always being one of the first to take up a position on a patrol. He always puts the clan before himself and that seems to at times get tedious, giving him the name of leader’s pet at times, not that he really cares though. Oakstorm never breaks the warrior code, apart from when he is told to by the leader and never disobeys the leader. But this is meerly a cover up for his hidden ambitions of ruling ShadowClan and one day taking over ShadowClan from dewstar which was made easy and over the time in thunderclan, his ambitions have faded and he has become more and more loyal to Dewstar.
Personal;; Oakstorm is generally a very sociable cat who is always willing to have a joke or clown around with fellow clan mates. He is good tempered but can get bad tempered when something happens that he doesn’t like, say a piece of territory stolen or new cats accepted into the clan from another clan or out of the clans with no experience since he hates half-clan cats.
Strengths And Weaknesses;; Oakstorm although he may seem like a prefect cat at times, he is way from it. He is one of the worst hunters in the clan, being too loud and too graceful to catch much. It doesn’t mean he can’t, he just can’t bring back tons and tons of prey for the clan. Though what he lacks in hunting, he makes up for in his power in battle, being one of the best. Oakstorm will attack any cat that crosses the border without good reason.
He does although give second chances and to some of the other cats in the clan, it can seem like a weakness at times and he does fall head over paws for different she-cats at times, even if he does always put the clan before any other cats, that could change one day if he ever meets the right she-cat. Oakstorm is fairly fast and that and the marshes of Shadowclan combined is all that has given him his strength, hey, it’s not like he was born like this.
Oakstorm is rather witty and sly, like all Shadowclanners but still has his weaknesses and strengths like how he can weave his way into a cat’s mind with a few words or how with a single stare, he can most of the time get most cats to stand back.
IC: Oakstorm gave a small growl, his tail lashing from side to side as he gave Midnightfang a brief nod of his head with respect. He had nothing against the deputy but the whole senario was getting on his nerves. 'True, the other clans will need warning but there is nothing more we can do for them apart from that and remember, some cats may not believe our word for it and will be attacked anyways.' the deputy rasped.
Oakstorm looked to Midnightfang, his tail now wrapped tightly around his paws and his cinnamon pelt burning with the sun. 'But again, the clan comes first and right now we need to focus on training our apprentices and getting back our strength and numbers more than anything so we can run those pieces of fox dung out of our territory,' he meowed, flattening his brissled fur.
Code: Blood.
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Dec 26, 2007 9:50:04 GMT -5
Well, I don't think this has to be accepted, since the cat already exists...
but accepted! I love!
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