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Post by &&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò] on Aug 18, 2008 21:54:05 GMT -5
[ Yes, that is. Thank you. It just sometimes gets a bit confussing. ]
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 19, 2008 12:46:06 GMT -5
ooc; Thank ya, Dreamy & Mouse both.
Shimmer stood still, letting the cat hit his mark. There was a burning pain as claws sunk into her back, and then she moved fast. She flipped over, hoping to surprise the tom and trap him underneath her. She was not terribly heavy, but she was big enough to knock the wind out of a cat. She wanted to confuse or shock him enough that she would have a change to flip over again, leaving him on the ground, and pull her long talons through the fur of his belly. She was exposing her own in this very move, but that would only be a problem if someone else were around to take advantage. There was no one else present, of course. It was perfect - except that as she started to flip over, she scented another cat coming fast towards her.
Dawn could see the fight now, but barely. She was still a little distance away, and she couldn't perceive what exactly was going on. So she raced forward, hoping for a good surprise opening into the battle. She was hit with the scents, and was half relieved to find that no RiverClanner had been there. Instead it there was ThunderClan scent and rogue scent - it was just that she didn't know which was which. She would have to wait, not wanting to attack the wrong cat. She got a glimpse of the silver-and-white cat she-cat's eye and it was glinting with cruelty - probably the rogue. Except that Dawnstorm simply wasn't sure enough to join. She waited for another sign to make itself clear.
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 19, 2008 16:12:00 GMT -5
Briarheart started to tear at her back just as he felt her flip. He landed on his back, legs outstreched as the cat landed on him. Slightly knocked ou from the blow, he yowled and pushed with his powerful legs, hoping to throw the cat off as anger blazed in his eyes. "Get off my territory or die!" he howled, giving her one last chance. He was not caring about this new cat for the moment.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 23, 2008 13:42:41 GMT -5
Shimmer laughed. She let herself be pushed, turning quickly to attack his now exposed belly. Half twisting in midair, she landed easily on her paws and bounded at him - just in time to feel another weight on her back. She smelled RiverClan scent and knew it was some goody Clanner out to help her fellow Clanner or whatever. The weight lifted quickly - Dawn had remembered the loner's skilled moves and decided not to perch herself on her opponent's back. So she slashed with a paw at Shimmer's face, a blow which the beautiful Balinese - an experienced fighter, clearly, avoided. The loner, in turn, lunged forward and bit down on Dawn's shoulder and then was gone, suddenly and silently.
Dawn glanced towards the ThunderClan warrior and turned tail. She had no business on ThunderClan land and, although she wasn't afraid of a fight, she didn't want to go through awkward thanks. Her thick, many-hued pelt blended in with the forest as she exited the scene of the fight.
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 23, 2008 22:29:57 GMT -5
Briarheart growled, fur fluffed out as he scanned the forest, looking for the cat. He scented the area, and smelled nothing; but he knew she was out here somewhere, watching him. He kept the lookout for the slightest sound, the most sudden move, prepared to attack instantly.
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 24, 2008 15:21:36 GMT -5
ooc;;; they're gone. thanks for rping with a board little Cindy!
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 24, 2008 17:43:31 GMT -5
ooc:welcome! im just sorry it over,
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 24, 2008 18:47:51 GMT -5
ooc; Do you want a little tip on RPing fight scenes?
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 24, 2008 21:37:07 GMT -5
ooc: sure! that would be nice. thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by //Cindy// l u n a on Aug 25, 2008 12:38:53 GMT -5
ooc;; If you make your character invincible, it isn't much fun. So picture the fight in your head and then get your character hurt. If you see the fight as a movie, that also helps. Then you can picture what the other person said, then add onto it with what your cat would do. So I guess that's two tips rolled into one, lol!
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Post by Mousefire on Aug 25, 2008 16:07:59 GMT -5
ooc: triple thanks cindy!!!!!!!!!!!
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