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Post by xXIvyXx on Jun 8, 2008 8:58:53 GMT -5
"We're here." said Ivypaw once they reached snake rocks. When she finished she smelled a mouse not to far away. Ivypaw tracked it down with the mouse's scent until she saw it. It was a plump mouse nibbling on a tiny seed. Ivypaw dropped into the hunter's crouch ans slowly and very carefully placing her paws very lightly on the ground. Before the mouse could run away Ivypaw sprang up and killed it with a swift bite to the neck. Returning back to the group she buried her prey near a rock. She was quite happy with her cacth and then she whispered "Thank StarClan." Then she turned to the others and said "Your turn." she mewed flicking her ears to Thisleclaw and Emberpaw.
OOC: Heres the mini plot: THe group catches whatever prey. Then a snake appears and tries to bite _________. Then _________ remembers a cure for snake bites. ________ runs off to get it while the other cat stays with who ever got bitten while they both smell other cats on their territory. That is all I will tell you so far. I'll tell you the rest after this part of the mini plot.
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Jun 8, 2008 15:02:10 GMT -5
Thistleclaw growled and stalked off. His ears alert for danger. He started when he saw a rabbit hop across his path and then took after it. Speeding up, he jumped and bowled it over, slashing it throat and killing it instantly. Picking it up, the male carried it back to the other two and dropped it by Ivypaws paws. He leaned forward and whispered.
"We can share this later, just you and me. Or if you really want, it's all yours."
He drew back and grinned at her.
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Post by xXIvyXx on Jun 8, 2008 18:15:05 GMT -5
"We can share it." she whispered to thisleclaw. "I don't need that much food." she said while her eyes sparkled. Ivypaw took the rabbit and buried it close to her mouse. "Now it is your turn Emberpaw." as Ivypaw flicked her tail towards Emberpaw.
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Jun 8, 2008 19:48:30 GMT -5
OOC: No offence meant, but I think Emberpaw should be the one to remember a 'cure'. She's a medicine cat apprentice, after all. Maybe Ivypaw should be the one attacked. Since's she's smaller, the poison would hurt her more, which would make for more tension.
Emberpaw felt horribly nervous. Yes, there was lots of prey around now, but she didn't think she could catch any. She had only caught prey two times, and was terrified of looking like an idiot.
"Um, okay...." she meowed, her voice slightly shaking.
She decided on a mouse, which couldn't fly away from her, or climb up a tree, and wasn't too big. Luckily, there was one a few feet away.
Emberpaw began to move towards it, being careful to be quiet. Her eyes were narrowed into blue slits; she was paying very close attention to this. In fact, it's unlikely that she would have even noticed a bright pink cat if it walked right past her.
Emberpaw was good at being quiet; she had lots of pratice, as she hated disturbing Cinderheart's patients. She managed to sneak up on the mouse, took a deep breath, and pounced.
The mouse avioded her first attack, as it heard her breath, but she moved on instinct, and she found it trapped under her paw in the next second.
Emberpaw stared, whatever trance she was in broken.
I did it. I can hunt. Maybe....but that was still really....kitish.
She reached down and killed the mouse with one sharp bite, and then turned to Ivypaw and Thistleclaw, praying they wouldn't mock her, but expecting that they would.
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Post by xXIvyXx on Jun 9, 2008 9:07:31 GMT -5
OOC: Ok. I wassn't sure that Emberpaw was a Med. apprentince, that why I put_____.
IC: "Is that your first try?" she mewed,"If it is you did way better than me when I tried hunting for the first time." Ivypaw let out a mrrrow of amusement as she remembered her first hunt.
"Here, I'll put the mouse away for you." While she buried it next to the rabbit and the other mouse that she caught.
Before she could bury the mouse, a snake appeared out of one of the cracks in the rocks and bit Ivypaw hardly on a front leg. Ivypaw let out a yowl of pain before she tried to kill the snake that bit her.
Then her leg felt numb and soon afterwards she collapsed on her side. My leg is feeling very numb, she thought, I can't move it. Ivypaw tried to move her other legs, but it was useless. No matter how hard she tried, her numb and painfull leg was to hard to move. Everytime she treid to move her bitten leg pain shot through her, everytime more worse than the other. Thats it, she thought, I guess there is nothing I could do any more. Ivypaw lied there thinking she was well on her way to Starclan.
OOC: by the way Seasle, can you please post like how Emberpaw gets the cure, if you know what i mean. I am not trying to be rude or anything, it is just that so we know you are still here.
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Jun 10, 2008 1:51:27 GMT -5
Thistleclaw sat of a long time, wondering where Ivypaw was, she never took this long. Sighing, he stood up.
"Emberpaw, stay here. I'm going to find Ivypaw." he said and galloped off.
He didn't need to go far, he found Ivypaw laying on her side barely breathing. She had been biten by an adder, anyone could see that. He licked her face a few time and then slung her onto his back. He was no Tigerfang with butestrength but he was strong. Cantering back to Emberpaw he put Ivypaw back down.
"She's been bitten by and adder. Help her, please?" he was desperate.
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Post by xXIvyXx on Jun 10, 2008 19:15:18 GMT -5
Ivypaw layed there motionless, trying to lookaround to see whats happening. Then everything went black.
She wondered why she can still breathe a little bit. Then she relaxed and took in as much air as she can and tried to say, "goodbye." It was a soft murmur but you could have still heard it.
She imagined a StarCLan warrior waiting there for them to join her, with them in the starry ranks, where all clancats become one clan. She was going to miss her friends and Thisleclaw. She would have winced at the idea of not having Thisleclaw around.
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Jun 10, 2008 20:10:17 GMT -5
Emberpaw seemed to puff up a bit at Ivypaw's praise. No, it wasn't her first time, but it was close enough. Her blue eyes sparkled, and she felt happy for a few seconds, before she remembered why she had been so depressed recently.
You are a demon. Really, you are. Just accept it.... whispered a little voice in her mind.
Emberpaw shook her head sternly. She was not a demon; she was a cat, and she was a cat feeling much to happy to allow her doubts to win.
When Thistleclaw left, she felt a bit worried, but not much. It was unlikely anything bad happened....but then, they were near Snakerocks...
Emberpaw stared a Ivypaw, whose eyes were begnning to cloud over. She knew it was poison, what else could it be? Besides, she could see the bite marks of the snake's fangs.
Part of Emberpaw was screaming for her to run and hurry, and find herbs, but she was frozen. She stared at Ivypaw and wondered....
If she was left untreated, what would she look like? was a question that played in her mind.
No, no. she screamed in her head. I've got to go get medicine, I can't stay here and watch her die....however much I may want too.
That thought made her shiver, which allowed her to move again. Emberpaw took one breath, and then steeled herself. She could not be weak now, she didn't have the time.
"Thistleclaw, keep Ivypaw awake. Don't let her sleep, make sure she knows she'll live if she can fight it." Emberpaw meowed, her voice sharp and loud. "Ivypaw, you are not going to die. I'll be back with herbs soon."
And with that statement, Emberpaw turned around and left running.
OOC: This will be a good time for some drama.....
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Jun 11, 2008 1:54:48 GMT -5
Thistleclaw nodded and turned to Ivypaw.
"Come on Ivypaw! Stay awake, you'll be fine! please! Live fore me! Its not you time. You're strong! Please!"
The he had an idea. He rest his paw gently on her ear and pricked her, lightly. But the pain would be enough just to keep her awake.
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Post by xXIvyXx on Jun 11, 2008 19:37:22 GMT -5
OOC: Here comes the rest of the plot,- When Emberpaw goes and get the herb, Skykit shows up and Skykit tries to protect Ivypaw by fighting Thisleclaw and then finally either Thisleclaw or Skykit stops fighting and says whatever. (skykit thinks Thisleclaw had hurt Ivypaw.) Anytime you want seasle you can come back with the herb, but not to early.
IC: Ivypaw felt slight pain as she began to see and speak for a while. She looked up seeing THisleclaw by her side. Ivypaw stirred a bit to get Thisleclaws attention. When Thisleclaw turned around Ivypaw whispered in his ear, "I would like to stay alive to be with you, but it is too late. I can't fight it. I'll wait for you in Star-." Ivypaw was cut off when everything went black again. She found herself in a starry place. This must be StarCLan. she thought. Then she saw a StarCLan warrior come up to her and the starry cat meowed, "Hello, Ivypaw. There are a few things I want to tell you."
OOC: She is not going to die.
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Jun 12, 2008 1:52:01 GMT -5
"Noo! Noo!" roared Thistlclaw as Ivypaw stopped talking. He paced around his, flinging his head around. She was dead. No! He liked her, no even more, he loved her. She was a kit though! How could she die? Why? Didn't StarClan love her??
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Post by xXIvyXx on Jun 12, 2008 8:34:47 GMT -5
The starry cat flicked his tail as a signal for Ivypaw to come closer. Ivypaw did. "THere are some things I want to tell you. You need to keep on fighting to stay alive. It is not your time for you to go here. Now keep trying to live." the starry cat said.
With a flick of his ears, Ivypaw was back, everything still black. She kept on breathing to live. "Thisleclaw, I have to tell you something." she murmured. THen she went on, " I like you, I really do. I like you more than both you and me could have imagined." Ivypaw hoped Thisleclaw felt the same way or she would have said all of that for nothing.
Then she felt slightly embaressed. What If he doesn't feel the same way, she thought, I guess if he does not feel the same way, I might as well give up on living.
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Post by *Simply Seasle* on Jun 12, 2008 13:55:10 GMT -5
OOC: The drama! Ahem.
Skykit padded around Snakrocks, her blue eyes bored. Yes, she liked sneaking into other cats' territory, but it wasn't as fun when then didn't notice.
Then she spotted Ivypaw, and ran towards her. She had met the apprentice a while ago, and had liked her as much as she could like a cat not of her clan.
Skykit walked up to Thistleclaw. He was hurting her!
"Die." she meowed in as voice as cold as ice, before leaping at Thistleclaw, who only had a second's warning.
In her mind, Skykit was surprised at how protective she felt of Ivypaw. Normally, she didn't feel emotions much, and was very calm, but now she felt furious.
Nobody hurts my friend!
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Emberpaw ran to the river, skidded to a stop, and grabbed some stinging nettles, not bothering to seperate the pods from them. She could do that when she got back....if it wasn't too late.
Emberpaw shuddered, and tried to run faster.
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Post by xXIvyXx on Jun 12, 2008 19:31:58 GMT -5
OOC: More of the plot- After a while Ivypaw opens her eyes again but her mind still feels woozy. This is when you get to decide what happens next.
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Post by //Diamonte . x on Jun 13, 2008 3:03:48 GMT -5
Thistleclaw leant down to nuzzle her and was purring. The purring stopped as calws fastened onto his palet. he reared up and slashed it across the face and then jumped back and charged agin in a frenzied yet controlled attack. Spinning, kicking then turning slashing withone paw. Scoring the whole time. He jumped back so he could see the enemy.
"What the hell do you think you're doing, idiot? Can't you see I'm trying to help her?"
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