Colekit & Creamkit need help! |Closed/Story Done|

[sourmapl3]

"Hurry Cream! Mom and dad said don't stop running!" Colekit and Creamkit were running for their lives from and unknown cat, as their parents were fighting for all their lives back against the cat. Hopefully winning. "I-i can't Cole!" Creamkit called back gasping for air. He remembered his farther words. ''Colekit always watch over you sister." He ran back to her and nudged her up from the ground. "C-come on hurry." Just then a loud growling came just in front of them. They both looked up to see something they had no clue what it was, but it was a fox. "AHH!" "Hurry run into that tree!" They both ran to the trunk of the tree, and ducked inside it was just big enough for the both of them, but it would not take long for the fox to break some of the trunk off and kill the two young kits. Creamkit huddled behind her brother. "HELP! ANYONE!! HELP!" She screamed. "HELP! HELP" They fox was getting more annoyed by their high pitch mewling but kept trying to get them.

((They don't understand the kit part of their name so they just call each other Cole and Cream.))

[sourmapl3]

The fox was getting closer. Creamkit Screamed louder then every before. "HELPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!" she began to sob uncontrollable, as Colekit tryed to clam her.

[autumnkit]

Rainflight was hunting for the clan when she(rainflights a girl i think..) heard screams and snarls. "I'm Coming!" rainflight yowled as she ran toward the noise. When she got there she saw a fox colekit and creamkit.She Jumped on the foxes back trying to distract it. "Run! Now!" she said as the fox tried to get her off.

[sourmapl3]

"Cream! come! run!" Colekit nudged her up and out of the whole in the tree. "W-whats h-happening!" she tried to say through sobs. They both ran and hid in a small ditch, where the fox could not see them.

[autumnkit]

Rainflight pushed the Fox near a gorge and jumped on its back and scratched its flanks. *Th Gorge!* Rainfilght thought. She jumped off just in time too.As she jumped the fox was plumiting towrd the bottom. "I'm gonna regret that in the morning.." rainflight said looking down. *the Kits!* she thought and ran after them so they wouldn't get hurt.

[sourmapl3]

Creamkit and Colekit, had run really far, well as far as a kit could.
"Can't go on..." Creamkit mewed. "We have to...mom and dad said don't stop till you find Riverclan..." Creamkit had already fallen asleep, and Colekit would soon join her. He tired to stay awake. "Riverclan...." And he fell asleep with his sister in the open.

[autumnkit]

rainflight found the kits sleeping. She nudged them awake."Come on get on my back i'll carry you to Rivercla."Rainflight said getting on her belly so the kits could climb up.

[sourmapl3]

"Huh?" Creamkit was nudged awake, and saw the cat who had told them to run. She nudged Colekit awake. Creamkit climbed on to the cats back, Colekit tried but slipped off, he couldn't feel his paws anymore from all the running they had done that day.


(( should we start a forum in Riverclan camp?))

[autumnkit]

((Ok just lets get them there first k?)) "Cream Kit Grab Your Brother And help him Up Please."Rain Flight said leaning a little so it would be easier for the kits.

[sourmapl3]

"y-ya sounds good..." She reached over and pulled up Colekit. They snuggled into the nice cats warm fur and fell asleep ever so slightly letting their front claws out so they wouldn't off.

((k )

[autumnkit]

once Rainclaw felt claws and ran. they Reached The Camp a Little Later. "Ok everyone off." Rainflight said as she went on the ground. ((ok thread now?))

[sourmapl3]

Both kits stumbled off.

((Ya umm you make one k )

[autumnkit]

((k i did its called The Kits return )

[sourmapl3]

((k )

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