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Post by Azure on May 24, 2007 14:46:52 GMT -5
Who can make the best love poem?
Here's mine. Tell me what you think of it.
I never thought i would find you. Unexpected. What you did to my heart. When I lost hope you where there to remind me, This is was the start.
Life is a road and I want to keep going. Life is a river and I want to keep flowing. Life is a road now and forever, a wonderful journey.
I'll be there when the world stops turning. I'll be there when the storm is through. In the end I want to be standing, at the beginning with you.
Please now "Roses are Red" stuff like that. Make it orginal.
~heartbroken
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Post by ./*/_feather_\*\. on May 28, 2007 13:17:30 GMT -5
This is my limerick!
There once was a boy in love, His heart had fluttered above, One day he came, The girl thought he was lame, And now he's friends with a dove.
~Feathertail~
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Post by Azure on May 28, 2007 15:40:27 GMT -5
Lol. That's funny.
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Post by Cheetah on May 28, 2007 19:38:48 GMT -5
Why am I here In this sea of nothing, In the canyons of lonliness, When all I must do is reach out? Why do I choose to live with this sinning demon guiding me, When You would kill it with one swipe. In one way. You died.
I wrote this because to me, there's no love greater than God's.
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Post by Midnightstorm on Nov 14, 2007 17:09:41 GMT -5
This is mine but i wort it when i was 5 so............... cats are noble cats are brave, cats sometimes don't behave, weather warriors or weather wery cats are never drery, so if you see a cat think of him like that.
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Post by Nightpaw on Nov 14, 2007 19:33:35 GMT -5
Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Dust, You were the only one that I could trust. Life went on, but time was forgot; Left on the battle field, to wither and rot. You had departed, your soul was taken, into a dream, which you wouldn't awaken. Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Dust. Why must your parting seem so unjust.
This is for my Grandfather, who died last Summer.
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Post by STREAMY ?! on Nov 17, 2007 15:35:01 GMT -5
Nighty, that put me to tears ='( Beautiful!
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Post by silvercloud on Nov 18, 2007 18:06:32 GMT -5
Oh my gosh! Nightpaw, you wrote that!? That was ammazing! It was emotionally beautiful *sniff* ='(
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Emberstar
Kit
Whoever said anything's possible clearly never tried slamming a revolving door.
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Post by Emberstar on Dec 27, 2008 0:10:26 GMT -5
The wind rushes through my hair as I walk along; It whips and whistles through the air like a song. When it whistles through the trees, It makes me wonder about many things. Like whether the birds sing for a reason, Or if they sing because they have a song. But, I think I’ve known the answers all along.
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Post by Icesky on Jan 2, 2009 22:37:15 GMT -5
i wrote this when i was 9
Sneeze
When you sneeze,do you wiggle,does it tingle,can it tickle
When you wheeze do you jump do you slump to the floor like a camel with broken knees
when you ask please do you get it do you wet it do you bleat like a sheep
When you get cheese(?) are you pleased do you wobble your knees do you feel a light breeze
When you meet a gator do you hate'er or do you say see ya later
When you get a piece of paper do you write a poem about sneezes wheezes pleases cheese and
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Post by Icesky on Jan 2, 2009 22:37:39 GMT -5
gators
WELL I DO!!!!!!!!!!
sorry bout the double post.... couldn't fit it all in 1 post
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Anidori
New-Born
If we don?t tell strange stories, when something strange happens we won?t believe it.
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Post by Anidori on Jan 3, 2009 21:16:25 GMT -5
I'm sorry Azure, but if you really wrote that then you helped write all the music for the Anastasia movie...sure, make a rule that it has to be original then post somebody else's work. That's called plagiarism, my friend, that and hypocrisy.
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 3, 2009 21:27:13 GMT -5
This is haiku, a japenese form of poetry. It is made up of five syllables in the first line, seven in the second, and five in the third.
Cats eyes glow brightly. Night is drawing to a close. Birds begin to sing.
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 3, 2009 21:36:54 GMT -5
Life is like a river,with unexpected turns. Life is like fire, if you're not careful, you get burned. Life is an odd thing, It's hard to understand. But let's just live it, take it by the hand. Let's live our life, and grab it while we can.
~Firestar10123~
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Post by Swifttail on Jan 4, 2009 20:54:18 GMT -5
AHH!!!! I fall, down, down. Out of the tree, down to the ground. ~ I wrote this a cat... My claws grab thin air... Then I realize... I'm a cat! I'll land on my feet! It's worth a try... I plop down lightly... I'm alive! Time to go hunting. Who says cats have nine lives!?!?
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